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Title: kabul
Post by: arti sehgal on March 29, 2010, 07:35:14 AM

aap mujhe sookh de
                                 mujhe kabool hai
aap mera dard har me
                                mujhe kabool hai

aap mujhe jiwan ke sab sookh de
                                
                                 mujhe kabool hai

aap mujse pyar kare , aap mujhe apni mamta de, aap mujhe apne charno me jaga de
                                
                                  mujhe kabul hai
                                                                                                          jai sainath
                                
                                

Title: Re: kabul
Post by: saib on March 30, 2010, 02:09:13 AM

Good Poem, Arti…………..But

Sai Dukh De
Sai Dard De
Sai Jeevan ka koi Sukh Na de
Kabul Hai........???
Yeh sochna hi bahut badi bhool hai
Hum apne karmo ko jhelte hai
icchaon ki aag me jalte hai
Par naam sai ka dharte hai
sachai ko manne se darte hai
sai to daya ka sagar hai
who to sabki pida harte hai
sabki chupchap sunte hai
phir bhi aah nahi bharte hai
sabka bhala karte hai!

Jai Sai Ram!

Title: Re: kabul
Post by: arti sehgal on March 30, 2010, 03:28:01 AM

sai ram sabibji
aap ne teek kaha sai dookh nahi dete sai dookh harte hai . shamma karna me soch kuch rahi thi poem kuch aur likdi sai se bhaut pyar karti hoo. par sai ko apne dooko ka zimedar nahi samjhti. ek sai to mera hai. i have change my wordings
thanks . jai sairam.................................